For my Gap Crit, I decided to show my Paintings and Sculptures. The Gap Crit was a worthwhile exercise, people gave me both positive and helpful feedback and even brought up things about my work that I hadn’t thought about. I have lot’s of ideas of progression from this exercise.
For example, someone said that the brightly coloured painting linked with pollution in terms of the colours being toxic and saturated just like the world is becoming. I hadn’t thought about the colours representing toxicity. The idea of combining the dark paintings with the brighter painting came up which is what I am thinking of working with next. Thin glazes rather than opaque paint was mentioned. The subtle smell of oil was considered effective and my use of polluting materials something I should continue with and further but I should integrate the litter into the work more rather than it being so on the surface.
Someone said my paintings give an impression of a world they wouldn’t want to be in, but they are in. This confirms to me that they are highlighting environmental harm and avoiding overlooking it successfully.